New Year Snow
An original epiphany poem
My family in slumber, only I am awake to vagrant snow that bivouacs at the front door, tiptoes into our estate, hushing gravel, soundproofing the bonnets of transfiguring cars, reading the dark back to itself, putting the world to rights. Alive to what awaits the waking light - our antiphons of ‘oh’ and ‘snow’, as though a liturgy on the living, breathing epiphany of drifting stars that bed down in the dirt, and finally raise our eyes to heaven again - I will guard this like a mislaid gift discovered under a dismantling tree, keep watch over this season’s last bequest of light, that guides our journey back into a still dark world.



I loved how you used “bivouac” here…and the soundproofing of snow is tangible! We just got a blizzard a week ago that brought 20+ inches of snow and 55mph winds, so I’m a sucker for a snow poem. (I have a big one coming next week)
This is lovely!